Interview with author, Adam Oster – Part One

Buddy Jackson, in THE LEGEND OF BUDDY HERO, was instantly endearing to me since he also has “a long-standing feud with mornings.” The hapless protagonist isn’t the only person who drinks to forget.  What Buddy has forgotten might just kill him, that is, it would if he wasn’t indestructible. 

Buddy is a meta-human and a former superhero, but a world-wide mind-swipe has left everyone unaware of his true character, especially Buddy. When his ultimate nemesis returns from oblivion, Buddy starts to change from a lazy drop-out to a hero as he encounters former enemies and friends.

Since the government turned its back on supers, their only supporter is mob boss, Arthur Flores.  The moral dilemma of working with the Flores Corporation is balanced against the alternative of facing the government.  It’s hard to tell the good guys from the bad ones.  Even arch-nemesis, Dominion, thinks he’s justified in destroying the world because God is on his side.  We question everyone’s motives, and reevaluate stereotypes.  In the end, good prevails, as it must, but another mind-swipe leaves the Defenders wondering, what’s next?

We get the answer to that question on August 1, 2014, when author, Adam Oster, releases Book Two in THE DEFENDERS SAGA.  Here is my interview with Adam on the dawn of his new book release.

Adam, give us the name of your new book and where we can find it.
It's called THE RISE OF THE FAT MOGUL, and it will be available through Amazon.com at http://www.amazon.com/Rise-Mogul-Defenders-Saga-Book-ebook/dp/B00M9LFJBI/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1406823195&sr=1-1/.

Pitch the book for us in your own words.
Saving the world doesn't mean squat if no one knows it was ever in trouble. Buddy Hero and The New Defenders may have defeated the villainous Dominion and saved the world from ultimate destruction, but thanks to another worldwide redaction, no one knows. So when a familiar face reappears and claims to be the head of the Meta Human Defense Team, the heroic team finds themselves facing the ultimate decision.

The New Defenders find danger coming at them from all sides as they face off against yet another world-threatening calamity, all in full view of the Sun City Comic Convention and the Real Life Superheroes.

Now if only they could come up with a way to pay the rent.

It's easy to make comparisons between your parody of the graphic novel superhero genre to Pixar's THE INCREDIBLES.

On the topic of The Incredibles...I had been working on The Legend of Buddy Hero for years before that movie came out, and when the first teaser came out for Brad Bird's great film, where an overweight Mr. Incredible is tossing on his tights for the first time in years, I was admittedly rather saddened. One of the sequences I had first come up with for this past his prime superhero was one very similar to that and I realized now I would appear to be copying. However, I have managed to incorporate what I believe to be a much more clever (and appropriate to the series) version of that scene into The Rise of the Fat Mogul, which is quite honestly one of my favorite scenes in the book. The Incredibles caused me to have to modify a lot of my original ideas for the book (you know, the ideas that bounced around in my head for the decade before I started putting words on the page). Movies like that (as well as graphic novels like The Watchmen) have trodden similar ground over the years and I wanted to be careful to pay homage, but not copy what had come before. To be unique, while recognizing what was there.

In THE INCREDIBLES, the super population is driven underground because people rebelled against property destruction caused by the heroic efforts of superheroes to save lives. In your saga, the Defenders follow government orders to save a bank while nearby a bus falls off a bridge and the citizens aboard it suffer and agonizing death by drowning. The difference is the government's involvement in controlling the superhero's efforts. Your government chooses to save property at the expense of a few lives.

The philosophical question you raise captured my interest. Does your second installment in THE DEFENDERS SAGA continue to explore these philosophical questions about society?
I think you'll find that The Rise of the Fat Mogul is a perfect continuation of the first book. There's a lot more revelation of the time before the original Mind Wipe, a lot more about what brought these characters to their current situation and a lot more of that basic philosophical question of, who is really doing what's best for the world. I'm pretty proud of it.

In THE LEGEND OF BUDDY HERO you took the time to not just develop dynamic protagonists, but you also created a robust backstory in Dominion, his psychotic break, and the tragedy that drove him to become a villain. Do you spend as much time developing backstory for the villain in the new book, THE RISE OF THE FAT MOGUL?
As the title might suggest, I like to consider that The Rise of the Fat Mogul is about the villains. Obviously, the story follows mostly from Buddy's perspective, but this one really gets into the nitty gritty of how these villains could have come about and gives a lot more of that origin type stuff that people love, but of course, not at the sacrifice of the action.

Also, in THE LEGEND OF BUDDY HERO there seemed to be some relationship building (or re-building) between Kid Zero and Maggie as well as between Buddy and Alexa. Will we see those relationships grow in THE RISE OF THE FAT MOGUL, or will you be introducing new characters?
Characters are what the books are all about to me, although I did do a lot with this book to try to cater to those who wanted some rather specific answers after reading the first. There's a lot of interpersonal action going on, in fact, the main catalyst for the basic action of the book is due to a renewed relationship between two of the main characters. But...as you'll see, this book just doesn't stop there. We get conflicted relationships and. of course, new relationships with the new characters that come into play.

I also love that you bring up Zero and Maggie. Not many people seem to latch on to the fact that there's something going on there. Unfortunately, that won't be fully explored until book three, The Return of Kid Zero.

So, there you have it folks! More backstory, more action, new villains and new relationships await us in THE RISE OF THE FAT MOGUL, available August 1 on Amazon.com. Tune in to my next blog post when my interview with author, Adam Oster, continues. He'll talk about himself and his experiences with this new world of self-publication.

Find out more about Adam and his books for both young and old at http://fatmogul.com/, Twitter at @fatmogul and Facebook at http://www.facebook.com/fatmogul/.

Sign up to receive e-mail notification about new book releases by Adam Oster at http://fatmogul.com/email/. Feel free to e-mail him at adam@fatmogul.com.

Check out his Amazon author page at http://www.Amazon.com/Adam-Oster/e/B00C5RBJR4/ref=ntt_athr_dp_pel_1/.

And obtain your own copy of THE LEGEND OF BUDDY HERO at http://www.Amazon.com/Legend-Buddy-Hero-Defenders-Saga-ebook/dp/B00C4VHP4W/ref=la_B00C5RBJR4_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1406263445&sr=1-2/. 

Fighting PPP (Pedantic, Plodding Prose) Rule Number Six: Check for continuity

At this point you can call your work-in-process a NOVEL.  That’s right, you’ve done it.  The last thing you need to do is read it.  I’m serious.  Find a comfy chair, start at the beginning, and read your novel as if you’ve never seen it before.

Are there any elements of the story which stick out?  These may be continuity errors.  This is your chance to fix them before publication.

For example, in Richelle Mead’s VAMPIRE ACADEMY series, there are a few continuity errors which cause the reader to pause and scratch their heads.

In book three of the series, SHADOW KISS, the character Jill is first introduced as an Air User but in the following books and in the BLOODLINES series, she is a Water User.

In the first book, VAMPIRE ACADEMY, Dimitri tells Rose that he only has two sisters, but in book four, BLOOD PROMISE, he has three.

I’m not picking on this author or this series, everyone makes mistakes.  The point is to look for them before self-publication.  The best way to do it is by reading your book from start to finish, just for the sheer pleasure of it.

The final step of battling PPP is to repeat the process.  Read your book, or ask others to read it, until you are confident the prose flows.  Congratulate yourself, author.  You’ve conquered PPP.

Fighting PPP (Pedantic, Plodding Prose) Rule Number Five: Look for unnecessary words or phrases

If you’ve been following this series of steps as you’ve edited your own work-in-progress, your story is looking pretty good right now.  The prose is tight and the grammar is perfect.  The final steps are like a fine-grain polish on a piece of rare silver.  The result will be stunning.

In Chapter Four of SEEING MAGIC I wrote

“No,” I demanded.  “No more secrets.  I hate secrets.  Tell me what you know about my family.”  I almost shouted at him but realized immediately my anger should be directed at Mom, not Evan, so I softened my tone and pleaded, “Please…tell me what you know.”

Pippa from Authonomy suggested

“you probably don't need 'and pleaded, ' as her first word is please”

In Chapter Five I wrote

“Exactly what time is it?”  I grumbled as I tried to rub the sleep out of my eyes.  I sat up and that’s when I realized the pain liniment had completely evaporated.  The whole left side of my body hurt…a lot.

“It is…6:30 AM.”  Evan walked right into the bedroom.  For the second time, he’d entered my bedroom without permission.  First, I checked my pajamas.  I tended to twist them up when I slept.  I pulled at my top so it didn’t cling to my chest, then I yelled at him.

“Don’t they teach you to knock first in West Virginia,” I snapped.

Again, Pippa suggested

“You could possibly lose 'my bedroom' as you've just told us he walked into the bedroom.
Also lose the 'I snapped' at the end of 'Don't they teach you....' as you've just said she's yelling.”

Searching for these final touches on a well-written manuscript is a painstaking process.  I suggest the following:

1.      Don’t edit for more than an hour at a time.

2.      Sit in a comfortable chair with good lighting.

3.      Edit on hard copy, using a larger font, which will be less strain on your eyes.

4.      Be proud of what you’ve already accomplished.

 

Good Luck!

Fighting PPP (Pedantic, Plodding Prose) Rule Number Four: Conjunctions and Prepositions

“Careful with using BUT as a sentence starter. It is supposed to be a conjunction, every now and then is probably OK, but you could probably join some of the sentences where you’ve placed in a full stop. (Old ex-English teacher coming out, sorry)” – DJ from Authonomy

Don’t start a sentence with a conjunction; don’t end with a preposition.  These two basic rules of English grammar are the most ignored among fiction writers today, and yet they create PPP.

Here is an example from the Prolog of SEEING MAGIC:

BEFORE:

I gave up.  We had been going back and forth like this for four days.  I knew that there was nothing I could say that would change her mind.

“Can you at least tell me what it is?”

“No, I don’t want to scare you.”  But those words scared me most of all.

AFTER:

I relented, but tried one last time to learn the driving force behind her decision.

“Can you at least tell me what this is?”

Her eyes wouldn’t meet mine.  “No, I don’t want to scare you.”

Those words scared me most of all.

Eliminating the grammatically incorrect ‘But’ at the beginning of the last sentence makes the impact of the words much stronger. 

Whenever I see a sentence start with ‘AND’, ‘OR’ or ‘BUT’ I ask myself one question.  Is this sentence really a continuation of the thought expressed in the sentence before it?  If the answer is yes, then I rewrite it as a clause to the previous sentence, separated by a comma.  If the answer is no, then I eliminate the conjunction.

From the first edition of SEEING MAGIC:

“What the hell did you think you were doing yesterday, Buach?”  He shouted at Green Eyes.  The man he’d called ‘Buck’ had taken a step back under the cover of the trees.  He looked a little intimidated by Evan.  But he still wore a sinister grin. 

From the second edition:

“What the hell did you think you were doing yesterday, Buach?”  He shouted at Green Eyes.  The man he’d called ‘Buck’ had taken a step back under the cover of the trees.  He looked a little intimidated by Evan, but he still wore a sinister grin. 

The technique of using periods to separate clauses instead of commas is common in marketing material intended to emphasize the story in as few words as possible.  That technique doesn’t work within a novel.  The use of the full stop causes the reader to stop reading, slowing down the flow of the prose.  What the author wants is for the reader to keep going until the end of the book.  Using a comma, as in the second edition, allows the flow to continue unimpeded.

A while back, I wrote a pitch for fellow author and friend, Chris Bostic, promoting his novel, FUGITIVES FROM NORTHWOODS.  An indie publisher, Krill Press, bought the publishing rights and decided to keep my pitch as part of the back cover.

My original pitch was written as follows:

“Child slave labor...that's what it's come down to.  After the total collapse of the world economy, even the United States couldn't stand together, so they failed separately.  In the small region-state of Minnkotasin, poverty and greed have turned the idyllic Northwoods of Minnesota into barren wasteland of clear-cut forests and over-fished lakes.  Every able-bodied teenager is conscripted into a labor force and sent to work in harsh, prison-like conditions.  They're enslaved young so they never learn to think for themselves.  Penn is different, and he's determined to win back freedom, for himself, his friends, and someday for his homeland.”

The editors at Krill Press rewrote the pitch as follows:

“After the total collapse of the world economy, the United States could not stand together.  So they failed separately.  In the small region-state of Winnkota, poverty and greed are turning the idyllic Northwoods of Minnesota into a barren wasteland of clear-cut forests and over-fished lakes.  Every able-bodied teenager is conscripted into a labor force and sent to work in harsh prison-like conditions.  They are enslaved young, so they never learn to think for themselves.  But Penn is different.  He’s determined to win back freedom – for himself, his friends, and someday for his homeland.”

Thankfully the editors deleted the first sentence with the dangling preposition, but notice what they did after that.  The conjunction ‘so’ is used to start a new sentence.  They added a ‘But’ before ‘Penn is different.’  These deliberate errors in grammar work in short marketing pitches.  They are PPP in novels.

 
Chris’ novel is available at http://www.amazon.com/Fugitives-Northwoods-Chris-Bostic-ebook/dp/B00B9676BU/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1404357395&sr=8-1&keywords=fugitives+from+northwoods/.